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雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)

雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letterThere is a problem in the road outside your house.3,范文朗读4 范文解析上题:

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你好呀,我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,给大家带来一个G类雅思写作范文。

老规矩,以下是正文目录:

1,题目

2,Mac范文

3,范文朗读

4 范文解析

雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)(1)

上题:

There is a problem in the road outside your house.

Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter

  • introduce yourself
  • explain what the problem is
  • tell the councilor what you would like to be done

审题:

  • Type: formal 正式
  • Key words: introduce/explain problem/to be done

雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)(2)

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

▲范文音频戳这里▲

Dear Councilor

My name is Tom Collins and I live on 25 Wood Drive.

Recently the local council installed speed bumps on the north-flowing lane before the traffic lights. Though I can understand the reasoning behind this decision to install these speed reduction measures an unintended consequence has developed namely that of increased noise pollution emanating from the trucks that despite slowing down still create a great deal of noise as they pass over the bumps. Sometimes this noise is so thunderous that even the house shakes and after speaking with several neighbors not only did they also complain of shaking but they even fear that it might cause heart issues especially with some of the elderly.

雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)(3)

From the locals I have spoken to there is a consensus building that instead of speed bumps to help encourage slower driving particularly with truck drivers we feel that flashing warning lights would be better. Not only would this reduce the noise from trucks but it would also be a much clearer signal to all drivers to slow down.

雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)(4)

I understand that sometimes what we think is best unwittingly produces other challenges but in the spirit of community I and the locals I have spoken to sincerely wish that you and the council appreciate our situation and take appropriate action to mitigate our worries.

Sincerely yours

Tom Collins

Standard Phrases:

  • Dear___
  • My name is
  • and I live on
  • understand the reasoning behind this decision
  • a great deal of
  • I understand that
  • Sincerely wish
  • Sincerely yours

Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语:

  • installed 安装
  • speed bumps 减速带
  • the north-flowing lane 北向的马路
  • measures 措施
  • unintended 无心的;无计划的
  • noise pollution 噪音污染
  • emanating from 产生
  • thunderous 雷鸣般的
  • a consensus (building) 达成一致意见;达成共识
  • flashing warning lights 闪烁警告灯
  • unwittingly 无意
  • the spirit of community 社区精神
  • appreciate our situation 了解我们的处境
  • take appropriate action 采取相应的行动
  • to mitigate 减轻;缓解

Cohesion (C&C words and phrases):

  • Recently
  • before the
  • Though… an
  • namely that of
  • that despite… still…
  • as they
  • Sometimes this
  • that even
  • and after
  • not only but they even
  • especially
  • From
  • particularly
  • not only but it would also
  • that sometimes
  • produces other
  • but

雅思写作科技类话题考点(G类雅思写作给localcouncilor的建议信)(5)

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