高考英语作文新题型实践指南：高考英语写作热点话题
高考英语作文新题型实践指南：高考英语写作热点话题注意：2. 你的一次劳动体验。服务性劳动包括现代服务业劳动、公益劳动与志愿服务两个任务群。1．（2022·山西临汾·三模）请你根据下面图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1. 你对图片的解读；
话题背景：教育部日前印发义务教育课程方案和课程标准（2022年版），其中《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》提出将劳动、信息科技从综合实践活动课程中完全独立出来。科学、综合实践活动起始年级提前至一年级。这就意味着，今秋开学起劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。义务教育劳动课程以丰富开放的劳动项目为载体，重点是有目的、有计划地组织学生参加日常生活劳动、生产劳动和服务性劳动，让学生动手实践、出力流汗，接受锻炼、磨炼意志，培养学生正确的劳动价值观和良好的劳动品质。
劳动课程内容共设置十个任务群，每个任务群由若干项目组成。
日常生活劳动包括清洁与卫生、整理与收纳、烹饪与营养、家用器具使用与维护四个任务群。
生产劳动包括农业生产劳动、传统工艺制作、工业生产劳动、新技术体验与应用四个任务群。
服务性劳动包括现代服务业劳动、公益劳动与志愿服务两个任务群。
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1．（2022·山西临汾·三模）请你根据下面图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1. 你对图片的解读；
2. 你的一次劳动体验。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文题目已为你写好。
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2．（2022·安徽黄山·二模）目前，劳动教育越来越受重视，劳动可以强健学生体魄，磨练学生意志，培养学生的良好品格，但有些学生认为高中生功课比较忙，劳动太占时间或影响学习……为此，你校校报英语专栏就此话题发起征文活动，请你以“My Opinion on Labor Education”为题撰写一篇短文参加征文活动。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．（2022·广东韶关·二模）假如你是李华，为迎接“五一国际劳动节”（International Workers’ Day），你校学生上周到中山公园开展了义务劳动，请你给你校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 劳动内容；3. 你的感悟。
注意：写作词数应为80左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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4．（2022·黑龙江·哈尔滨三中一模）上周三，你和全校同学参加了学校在光明社区组织的以“劳动最光荣”为主题的志愿劳动。现请你为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍具体情况。要点如下：
1. 目的；
2. 过程；
3. 意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Working Is Most Beautiful
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5．（2021·福建泉州·二模）假定你是李华，你校学生英语报正在举办“热爱劳动”为主题的征文活动。请你以“One of My Laboring Experiences”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 劳动体验；
2. 感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One of My Laboring Experiences
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6．（2022·山东枣庄·高三期末）最近，你参加了学生会组织的一次社区劳动。请你写一篇短文，给学校英语报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 劳动的经过；
2. 遇到的困难；
3. 收获和感悟。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Community Work Experience
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参考范文
1．
Labor Education Counts
The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development cultivating their all-round development of morality intelligence and physique. Just like the tree in the picture it is thriving on the boy’s watering.
When it comes to my experiences of labour making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unforgettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples oranges strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part cutting them into the style in the video which took me about thirty minutes. After that I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. To my delight when I served it to my families they all spoke highly of it.
No pains no gains. Through the hands-on experience not only do I gain a sense of achievement I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文。要求考生根据下面图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1. 你对图片的解读；2. 你的一次劳动体验。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
生动地：vividly→graphically
种类：kind→sort
乐趣：enjoyment→pleasure
在……中起着重要的作用：play an important role in→play an important part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples oranges strawberries and bananas.
拓展句：I first collected some kinds of fruit which include apples oranges strawberries and bananas.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Then came the most challenging part cutting them into the style in the video which took me about thirty minutes. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Through the hands-on experience not only do I gain a sense of achievement I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth. (运用了部分倒装句和that引导的宾语从句)
2．
My Opinion on Labor Education
Currently labor education has been increasingly attached great importance to but some students just bury themselves in books. They think that it is a waste of time if they do labor. So is it necessary for students to do it?
Actually time spent laboring will be rewarding. It can promote students to develop practical skills strong will unity and cooperation of good quality. Meanwhile they are also given the chances to contribute their shares and often rewarded with a spiritual fulfillment.
I have frequently been encouraged to actively engage in some housework at home since my early age. Therefore I have grown more skilful and am willing to take my share of obligation either at home or at school. It turns out that pushing ourselves on labor is very beneficial and essential.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“My Opinion on Labor Education”为题撰写一篇短文参加征文活动，强调劳动教育的重要性和益处。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
目前：currently→at present
机会：chance→opportunity
鼓励：encourage→hearten/inspire
有益的：beneficial→of benefit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually time spent laboring will be rewarding. It can promote students to develop practical skills strong will unity and cooperation of good quality.
拓展句：Actually time spent laboring will be rewarding which can promote students to develop practical skills strong will unity and cooperation of good quality.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】They think that it is a waste of time if they do labor. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It turns out that pushing ourselves on labor is very beneficial and essential. （运用了that引导的主语从句）
3．
Last week with the coming of the International Workers’ Day a voluntary labor was launched in Zhongshan Park by our school which left us students an unforgettable impression.
We first cleared the waste paper and bottles with brooms and mops and then packed them together. Later all these were sent to the rubbish bin. Besides we also watered the flowers and trees and cleaned the long benches in the park. Though we were exhausted we felt what we did was quite worthwhile.
It is the neat and tidy park that makes me realize we can make a big difference in building a greener future.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华，为迎接“五一国际劳动节”（International Workers’ Day），你校学生上周到中山公园开展了义务劳动，请你给你校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
筋疲力尽：wear out→ exhausted
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
意识到：be aware of→ realise
发起：initiate→ launch
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides we also watered the flowers and trees and cleaned the long benches in the park.
拓展句：Besides we also watered the flowers and trees and cleaned the long benches in the park that people used to sit.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Last week with the coming of the International Workers’ Day a voluntary labor was launched in Zhongshan Park by our school which left us students an unforgettable impression.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] It is the neat and tidy park that makes me realize we can make a big difference in building a greener future.（强调句式）
4．
Working Is Most Beautiful
To advocate the spirit of social service and voluntary contribution our school organized all the students to help in Guangming Community last Wednesday.
Each class worked as a group and undertook different tasks such as weeding the flower beds painting the walls cleaning the windows in the neighborhoods and so on. Besides some students helped the disabled do some repairs making them live comfortably. Everyone in the community spoke highly of us.
In the course of voluntary work we students experienced much and understood more. Making contributions to society and volunteering to serve the people can benefit us and inspire us to serve our country heart and soul.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍你和全校同学参加的学校在光明社区组织的以“劳动最光荣”为主题的志愿劳动的具体情况。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
承担：undertake→bear
另外：besides→moreover
过程：course→process
高度评价：speak highly of→think highly of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To advocate the spirit of social service and voluntary contribution our school organized all the students to help in Guangming Community last Wednesday.
拓展句：Our school organized all the students to help in Guangming Community last Wednesday whose purpose was to advocate the spirit of social service and voluntary contribution.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Besides some students helped the disabled do some repairs making them live comfortably.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Making contributions to society and volunteering to serve the people can benefit us and inspire us to serve our country heart and soul.(运用了动名词作主语)
5．
One of My Laboring Experiences
On May Day my classmates and I went to the neighborhood park to do some voluntary work which was to weed the park.
At 9:00 am. we got together in the park. We were divided into three groups and began to weed. Some students weed with a sickle some cut it with a shovel and others even pulled the grass with their hands. While we were doing that some tourists came to praise us which made us more than proud. Dirty and tired all of us were happy very much.
【解析】
【导语】
本文是应用文。要求考生以“One of My Laboring Experiences”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
去某地：went to→set out for
组，群：group→part
非常：more than→very much
骄傲：proud→take pride
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Dirty and tired all of us were happy very much.
拓展句：Though we were dirty and tired all of us were happy very much.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]On May Day my classmates and I went to the neighborhood park to do some voluntary work which was to weed the park.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]While we were doing that some tourists came to praise us which made us more than proud.（由While引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．
Last week the student union of our school organized a community labor and it was my honor to participate in this community labor as one of them.
Under the leadership of the student union we were divided into different groups to do different jobs. Some cleaned garbage corners of community streets. Some watered the flowers and trees by the roadside. Others were responsible for helping the elderly in the community with housework. Although the task was heavy everyone worked hard to finish it.
The activity was praised by the residents of the community and we also enjoyed it. We also learned that if each of us puts in a little effort our community will be a better place.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生关于参加学生会组织的一次社区劳动，写一篇短文，给学校英语报投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→ take part in
荣幸：honor→ privilege
负责：be responsible for→ take charge of
完成：finish→ complete
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week the student union of our school organized a community labor and it was my honor to participate in this community labor as one of them.
拓展句：Last week it was my honor to participate in this community labor as one of them which was our school organized.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Although the task was heavy everyone worked hard to finish it.（运用了Although引导的让步状语从句）
[高分句型2]It was my honor to participate in this community labor as one of them.（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to do sth作真正宾语）
