万能框架教你搞定高考英语应用文(高考英语之应用文建议信)
万能框架教你搞定高考英语应用文(高考英语之应用文建议信)You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________ and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.Dear________2. 提出具体建议并说明原因;3. 希望采纳建议,表达美好祝愿。建议信模板
应用文建议信(志愿者) 续写(新冠隔离)
第一节 应用文
建议信写作三步走
1. 写信原因及目的;
2. 提出具体建议并说明原因;
3. 希望采纳建议,表达美好祝愿。
建议信模板
Dear________
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________ and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
建议信常用表达:
1. I'm sorry to hear that (you are having trouble in...) Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
2. You have asked me for advice with regard to/concerning.... and I’ll make some suggestions here.
3. I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
4. I’m writing to share my views on this problem which I think may be helpful to you.
5. I would like to make some constructive suggestions/offer you the following suggestions hoping to help you.
6. I do hope/Hopefully these suggestions will be of great used to you.
7. I sincerely hope that you’ll find my suggestions beneficial.
8. To begin with it would be wiser to do...
9. As far as I’m concerned some measures should be taken to do sth.
10. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will there is a way.
11. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
12. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do good luck with your studies/work!
13. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help please let me know.
14. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. Wish you a pleasant trip to Beijing.
押题实战演练
假定你是李华 刚参加了北京冬奥会的志愿者工作。你的意大利好友David想申请下一届志愿者 写信向你询问相关情况 请你用英语给他写一封回信 内容包括:
1. 个人感悟;
2. 如何准备;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写
句式提升之倒装句
1. 全部倒装(谓语全部位于主语之前)
There be句型
1、明天我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛。
There will be an English speech contest in our school tomorrow.
2、有条河在这座县城里流过。
There is a river flowing through the county.
注意 :引导词there 还可以接appear exist lie remain seem stand live 等词。
如:
There lived an old fisherman in the village.
村里住着一位老渔夫。
There stand two white houses by the river.
河滨矗立着两座白房子。
There existed some doubt among the students.
学生中有些怀疑。
表地点的介词短语位于句首
1、我校位于文水县城东。校园很美 绿树成荫。
In the east of Wenshui County lies our school which is very beautiful with many trees.
2、校园后面有一个人工湖,使人印象深刻。
Behind the campus lies a man-made river which is impressive.
3、墙上有个通知,上面写着“请节约用水”.
On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water.
2. 部分倒装(有情提情,有系提系,都无助动)
so that 句型
1、时间是如此珍贵,我们不能浪费它。
Time is so precious that we can not afford to waste it.
So precious is time that we can not afford to waste it.
2、我们有如此多的作业要做以至于我们没有时间放松。
We have to do so much homework that we don’t have time to relax.
So much homework do we have to do that we don’t have time to relax.
3、这个问题如此的严重,以至于我不得不找到有效的解决办法。
The problem is so serious that I have to find effective solutions to it.
So serious is the problem that I have to find effective solutions to it.
Only 状语
1、只有我们每个人都意识到英语学习的重要性 我们才能学得更好.
We can learn it better only when each of us realizes the importance of learning English
Only when each of us realizes the importance of learning English can we learn it better.
2、只有用这种方式 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习.
We can have enough energy to study better only in this way/by this means.
Only in this way/by this means can we have enough energy to study better.
not only but also
1、我不仅英语学得好,法语也倍儿棒。
I not only have a good command of English but also I can speak fluent French.
Not only do I have a good command of English but also I can speak fluent French.
2、她不仅教会我们如何获取知识而且教会我们如何做人。
She not only taught us how to gain knowledge but he also taught us how to be a good person.
Not only did she teach us how to gain knowledge but he also taught us how to be a good person.
Never表否定意义的词位于句首
1、我从未见过如此负责任如此有耐心的老师。
I have never met such a responsible and patient teacher.
Never have I met such a responsible and patient teacher.
2、我永远不会忘记她为我所做的一切。
I will never forget what he has done for me.
Never will I forget what he has done for me.
3. 虚拟条件句的倒装
当if引导的虚拟条件从句中含有had were should等时,如将if省略,则要将had were should等移到主语前,构成倒装句:
Had you come yesterday you would have seen him.
若你昨天来,你就会见到他了。
Should you require anything give me a ring.
如果需要什么,可以给我打电话。
Were it not for your help I would still be homeless.
要不是你帮助,我会仍然无家可归。
注意:省略if后提前的had不一定是助动词
Had I money I would buy it. 假若我有钱,我就会买它。
押题实战演练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife Megan and I went out to dinner with an old friend who we had not seen for a while. There had been some talk of COVID-19 on the news but it was early in the outbreak and people were still going about their daily routines. Even though everyone in group felt perfectly we took precautions (预防): we washed our hands with soap and used hand sanitizer (洗手液) did not share food and had no significantly close contact.
A few days later our friend called and told us that she had tested positive for the coronavirus. She had felt some mild symptoms for a day or so after that dinner and was able to be tested because she is a doctor. On the following day I started to feel a little tired and my head was a bit cloudy. I decided to stay in the master bedroom away from the rest of my family. The next morning I woke up with a 39-degree fever. That was when we realized that I might have caught the virus from our friend.
At once Megan called our state’s coronavirus hotline who then called in our primary care doctor and the head of our local hospital system’s coronavirus team. We explained that we had been in contact with someone who had been tested positive and I was having symptoms. They quickly approved me to receive a test at an urgent care center located 5 kilometer’s drive from my house. The result made my heart sink-I was also tested positive and the local hospital didn’t have the facilities for my disease. As a mild case I was recommended to stay home and quarantine (隔离) myself.
Following the doctor’s advice Megan and I quarantined ourselves and our kids. With my symptoms developing I started isolation in the bedroom and the only interaction I had with Megan was when she brought in food. She slept on a small couch in our home office away from the kids’ rooms. She also minimized her contact with our kids in case she was carrying the virus.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1:
We decided to call everyone we had contacted over the course of the past week.
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Para.2:
Though worried about the seriousness of the virus I knew I had to be brave
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参考答案:
1.Dear David,
I am delighted to learn that you would like to be a volunteer in the next Winter Olympics. And I’d like to share with you my experience as a volunteer for the Beijing Winter Olympics and offer you some practical advice.
Firstly I have to say that it is the most exciting and meaningful experience for me to be a volunteer for the Beijing Winter Olympics. And it has a profound and significant influence on my life. Honestly I once made full preparations for it. I had to learn all the job duties mastered at least one foreign language and most importantly be willing to devote all my time to serving athletes with great patience and kindness.
I think that if you could do these you will certainly become a qualified volunteer.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华 刚参加了北京冬奥会的志愿者工作。你的意大利好友David想申请下一届志愿者 写信向你询问相关情况 请你用英语给他写一封回信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
开心的:delighted → pleased
提供:offer → provide
重大的:significant → remarkable
影响:influence → effect
掌握:master → possess
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:And I’d like to share with you my experience as a volunteer for the Beijing Winter Olympics and offer you some practical advice.
拓展句:And I’d like to share with you my experience in the Beijing Winter Olympics when I worked as a volunteer and offer you some practical advice.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am delighted to learn that you would like to be a volunteer in the next Winter Olympics.(that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I think that if you could do these you will certainly become a qualified volunteer.(that引起宾语从句;if引起条件状语从句)
2.Para.1:
We decided to call everyone we had contacted over the course of the past week. Megan insisted we should let them know that I had tested positive. Hard as it was to inform people that we might have given them the coronavirus it was the responsible thing to do. To our pleasant surprise all of our friends showed their understanding and support upon hearing the news. To cheer us up one of my wife’s best friends even baked a cake with the letters “Stay Strong” on it and delivered it to our front door.
Para.2:
Though worried about the seriousness of the virus I knew I had to be brave. I made sure to get plenty of rest and did some exercise to stay as healthy as I could. I also managed to ease the worries of Megan and our kids during our quarantine by spending more time doing online video-chats with them. Within the following week my fever started to fade and I could feel my head clearing. The next test showed a cheering result. It came back negative. Had it not been for the love and care from those around me I wouldn’t have made it.
【解析】
本文以新冠病毒为线索,作者和妻子与一个很久未见的朋友一起吃了一顿饭,不幸的是,吃完饭不久朋友打电话说自己新冠测出来是阳性。在接下来的几天,作者也出现了发烧的症状,去医院检查也是呈阳性,但是却被医院告知要回家居家隔离。因此作者便回家将自己隔离起来,并且不跟妻子和孩子接触,避免他们也被感染上。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们决定给在过去一周接触的每个人打电话”可知,本段可以写作者给他们打电话,得到了他们的理解和鼓励,这让作者感到无比温暖。
②由第二段首句内容“尽管担心病毒的严重性,但我知道我必须要勇敢”可知,本段可以写作者是如何勇敢面对病毒,对抗病毒,最后终于痊愈以及作者对此次经历的感受。
2.续写线索:给接触的人打电话→得到他们的理解和鼓励→作者自己要勇敢面对→作者如何勇敢对抗病毒→最终痊愈→感受。
3.词汇激活:
行为类:
使振作:cheer sb. up/pull up one’s slacks/buck sb. up
减轻:ease/relieve/alleviate
确保,保证:make sure/guarantee/make certain
情绪类:令人高兴的:cheering/joyful/pleasant/delightful
困难的:hard/difficult/tough
惊讶:surprise/amazement/astonishment
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Hard as it was to inform people that we might have given them the coronavirus it was the responsible thing to do.(运用了as引导的倒装句)
【高分句型2】Had it not been for the love and care from those around me I wouldn't have made it.(运用了虚拟语气的倒装)