雅思口语有趣型城市（雅思口语第2部分8分素材）
雅思口语有趣型城市（雅思口语第2部分8分素材）2，Mac点评1，雅思口语Part 2高分语料每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家分享1个雅思口语Part 2高频话题的高分语料，题目来自剑17。老规矩，以下是正文目录：
爱吃辣的加拿大大叔
雅思托福10多年一线教学
中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫
在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货
每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”
你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家分享1个雅思口语Part 2高频话题的高分语料，题目来自剑17。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，雅思口语Part 2高分语料
2，Mac点评
3，语料解析
- IELTS Speaking Part 2 -
▲音频戳这里▲
Describe a big city you would like to visit. You should say:
- Which big city you would like to visit
- How you would travel there
- What you would do there
And explain why you would like to visit this big city.
The one big city I would like to visit is Shanghai.
It’s one of the largest metropolises in China with a perfect combination of East and West as well as the traditional and the modern.
When I eventually go I will take a bullet train from Guangzhou to Shanghai. Though a plane ride only takes about 2.5 hours a train journey gives much more pleasure. I’d be able to enjoy the landscape along the way while listening to my favorite music.
Once in Shanghai the first stop would be of course the Bund. It’s such an iconic spot in this international city and is known all over the world! From what I know it’s usually all hustle and bustle along the river so I guess I’ll be joining the thronging crowds taking in the sights of Pudong district though I do imagine just sitting on some balcony overlooking the river and just sipping coffee as I admire the waterscape and the skyscrapers.
Next I’ll stroll along the streets in the older part of the city. I read online that the buildings on these streets were built a century or more ago yet are well preserved. I imagine small lanes lovely balconies and streets lined with tall old trees with cafes and bakeries boutiques and restaurants dotted throughout the old quarters.
The reason why I wish to experience Shanghai is because of the city’s sense of ‘openness’. It’s a perfect example of combining different cultures domestic as well as overseas. In the city one witnesses for instance futuristic skyscrapers while enjoying the tranquility of traditional local alleyways and colonial buildings side by side with Chinese architecture at least that’s what I imagine.
Anyway that’s the big city I would like to visit in the future.
Mac点评：
- Fluency & Coherence 流利性与连贯性：8
Uneven in places. 有几处卡顿。
- Lexical Resource 词汇多样性：8
Very good (a somewhat overused phrase and usually in relation to busy city centers during a work day)
虽然有一个用烂了的搭配，但也用了很多符合语境的词。
- Grammar Range 语法多样性及准确性：9
Excellent. 优秀。
- Pronunciation 发音：7
Intonation of the 1st ‘though’. Speech at times ‘clipped’—a couple of pronunciation issues.
第一个'though'的语调不自然，还有几处发音问题。
Overall 总分: 8
Standard Phrases:
- The one big city I would like to visit is
- Anyway that’s the big city I would like to visit
Vocabulary (and colloquialisms) 高分地道词汇和短语：
- metropolises 大都市
- bullet train 动车
- iconic spot 标志性地点
- hustle and bustle 熙熙攘攘
- thronging crowds 熙熙攘攘的人群
- sipping coffee 喝咖啡
- stroll along 漫步
- well preserved 保护得很好
- lanes 巷子
- boutiques 精品店；时装店
- dotted 分布于
- futuristic 未来派的；极其现代的
Coherence 展示“流利性与连贯性”的词汇和短语:
- as well as
- when
- though
- while
- once
- from what I know
- so
- though
- as
- next
- the reason why
- because of
- while
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