cet-6作文例句（CET-6作文Urbanizationin）

cet-6作文例句（CET-6作文Urbanizationin）①booming: 急速发展的【注释】With the booming① economy more and more China's population are now living in towns and cities. In my opinion this rapid urbanization is a good thing for it is the natural outcome of economic and social progress.As we can see many young people have moved from countryside into towns and cities just to find jobs. This movement has helped to provide the urgently② needed labor

【CET-6情景作文】Urbanization in China

Directions: Write a composition of about 150 words on the topic Urbanization in China. More and more of the China's population are living in towns or cities. Whether urbanization is a good thing or not has caused much argument. Comment on it with your own ideas.

【范文】

Urbanization in China

With the booming① economy more and more China's population are now living in towns and cities. In my opinion this rapid urbanization is a good thing for it is the natural outcome of economic and social progress.

As we can see many young people have moved from countryside into towns and cities just to find jobs. This movement has helped to provide the urgently② needed labor force to sustain③ the expansion of industries in urban areas. They work in factories or on construction sites④. They help to build roads bridges houses etc. Some of them work in the third industry making clothes decorating houses repairing shoes opening restaurants and so on. To some extent they have made our life more convenient and comfortable. On the other hand the surplus⑤ labor power from the countryside has found its great use in cities. Anyhow without their efforts our cities could not have developed so rapidly.

The urbanization process has some negative effects such as crowded cities and congested⑥ traffic. But I believe that the situation will turn for the better if a city government takes proper action and intensifies⑦ the administration⑧. In a word the urbanization is a positive phenomenon in China.

【注释】

①booming: 急速发展的

②urgently: 迫切地

③sustain: 支持

④construction sites: 建筑工地

⑤surplus: 过剩的 剩余的

⑥congested: 拥挤的

⑦intensify: 加强

⑧administration: 管理

【简评】

这是一篇根据情景提示展开的议论文。

第一段首先交待随着经济的发展，越来越多的中国人居住于城市。然后，作者亮出观点：城市化是一件好事，因为它是经济和社会发展的自然结果。第二段承接上文，列举了城市化的好处：来到城市的青年人为工业发展提供劳动力，从事第三产业使我们的生活方便而舒适，因而加速了城市的发展。第三段以客观的态度指出城市化的负面影响。段尾，作者总结全文：In a word the urbanization is a positive phenomenon in China.

本文主题鲜明，层次清晰，文笔细腻且富于变化，是一篇值得借鉴的成功范文。

资料来源：新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书：六级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2006