英语七年下六单元作文(CET-6作文 Booksand)
英语七年下六单元作文(CET-6作文 Booksand)Different books are appealing① to people of different ages. Fairy tales and cartoon books are usually for children. Stories and novels of love are written mainly for young people. Books with special purposes such as gardening② and fishing are more welcomed by old people.Books and Teenagers3.In my opinion teenagers are not supposed toread all kinds of books.【范文】
【CET-6段首句作文】 Books and Teenagers
Direction: You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Books and Teenagers in three paragraphs. You are given the topic sentence for each paragraph and your part of writing should be no less than 160 words.
1.Different books are intended for people of different ages.
2.The effects of books on teenagers can either be positive or negative.
3.In my opinion teenagers are not supposed to
read all kinds of books.
【范文】
Books and Teenagers
Different books are appealing① to people of different ages. Fairy tales and cartoon books are usually for children. Stories and novels of love are written mainly for young people. Books with special purposes such as gardening② and fishing are more welcomed by old people.
The effects of books on teenagers can either be positive or negative. A good book teaches youngsters knowledge exerts a favorable influence on their character and what is more shows them the way when they feel at a loss③. On the contrary books with much description of violence or sex will tempt adolescents④ to fight or commit a sexual crime.
In my opinion teenagers are not supposed to read all kinds of books. Due to a rather limited knowledge of the world teenagers are not experienced and educated enough to tell good from bad or right from wrong. Advice on book selection is helpful for the young. Those who receive proper instruction⑤ on reading books from their parents and teachers are more likely to become good citizens; whereas those who do not get any guidance⑥ may often feel confused or may grow to be the troublemakers⑦ in society.
【注释】
①appealing: 吸引人的
②gardening: 园艺
③at a loss: 困惑
④adolescents: 青少年
⑤instruction: 教育 指导
⑥guidance: 指导
⑦troublemakers: 惹麻烦的人 捣乱者
【简评】
这是一篇根据段首句展开的议论文。
在这种题型中,作文题目和每段的段首句都已给出。这些段首句通常就是这一段的主题句,它控制着整段的发展和结构。考生应该围绕着主题句进行扩展和深化,顺理成章完成全文。
文章首先用列举法说明不同的书吸引不同年龄层次的人们。然后从正反两个方面阐述书籍的影响既可能是积极的,又可能是消极的。最后一段,作者先旗帜鲜明地亮出自己的观点:In my opinion teenagers are not supposed to read all kinds of books.再用因果法加以证明。
本文思路清晰,结构紧凑。综合使用列举法、对比法和因果法,论证充分全面,令人信服。尤其是对比法的使用,给人印象颇深。排比辞格的恰当运用,加强了文字的气势。
资料来源:新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书:六级写作/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2006