雅思写作思路：青年应该遵循社会传统
雅思写作思路：青年应该遵循社会传统Individualism 个人主义Stereotype 偏见Frugality 勤俭Overarching 包罗万象的Entrenched 固有的
Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of society. Others think young people are free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
Etiquette 规范、礼仪
Moral conviction 道德规范
Frugality 勤俭
Overarching 包罗万象的
Entrenched 固有的
Stereotype 偏见
Individualism 个人主义
Individual liberty 个人自由
Juvenile delinquency 少年犯罪
有人说青年应该遵循社会传统，也有人说青年应该推崇个性自由。双边讨论并给出你的观点。
This is an exam question for a social topic because the question is relatively abstract so many students find it a bit difficult to write. But the good news is that the same type of discussion on the topic of "should we follow social traditions" should have been tested only 5 times since 2008 (including this question). Although the frequency is very low since we have encountered it let's take a look at how to write this question together.#英语#
这是一道社会类话题的考题，因为题目比较抽象，所以很多同学都会觉得有点难写。不过好消息是，同类型讨论“社会传统要不要遵循”的题目，08年以来应该只考过5次（算上这一题）。虽然频率很低，但既然遇到了，我们就来一起看下究竟应该怎么写这道题。
The topic itself is a large composition for bilateral discussion. Students can freely discuss the pros and cons of both sides and give their own opinions. But the two parts of "the traditions of society" and "young people are free to behave as individuals" in this title are too general. There are good and bad in traditional customs and the same is true of freedom of personality. We have all heard the viewpoint of "take the essence and discard the dross" so we suggest that the article can be neutral disagree with both sides and analyze separately.
题目本身是双边讨论类的大作文，同学可以自由讨论两边的观点利弊并给出自己看法。但这道题目中“the traditions of society” 和 “young people are free to behave as individuals” 两个部分都过于笼统了。传统习俗中有好有坏，个性自由同样如此。我们都听过“取其精华去其糟粕”的观点，因此我们建议文章可以持中立态度，两边都不赞同，并且分别进行分析。
传统习俗中有好有坏，个性自由同样如此。
There are many social traditions the good part everyone can remember eight words: "filial piety loyalty trustworthiness courtesy integrity and shame". (Don’t tell Yuebanya that you have never heard these eight words after reading so many years.)
社会传统有很多，好的部分，大家可以记住八个字：“孝悌忠信礼义廉耻”。（别告诉月半鸭那么读那么多年书你没听过这八个字）
Of course you don’t need to write the above 8 word explanations one by one when you write a large composition (you can also Baidu for specific explanations) but we can summarize that social traditions will benefit young people in four aspects.
当然，你写大作文不用把上面8个字解释挨个写上，但我们可以总结下，社会传统对年轻人会有四个方面好处。
The first is to encourage young people to honor their parents and elders encourage family relationships in-depth communication and mutual help among family members and deepen young people’s relationship with the family and this helps young people’s own healthy psychological growth.
希望年轻人提高自身的道德修养，礼貌待人并且勇于帮助他人。
一是鼓励年轻人孝敬父母长辈，鼓励家庭关系和睦、家庭成员之间深入沟通及互相帮助，加深年轻人对家庭的感情维系，并且这有助于年轻人自身健康的心理成长。
The second is to hope that young people will improve their own moral cultivation be polite and have the courage to help others. This allows young people to better cooperate with others and also helps young people get a better social environment.
二是希望年轻人提高自身的道德修养，礼貌待人并且勇于帮助他人，这能让年轻人更好地去和他人合作，也有助于让年轻人获得一个更好地社交环境。
The third is to teach young people to keep their promises and to earnestly complete responsible work and tasks which will also help young people's future career development.
三是教导年轻人要信守诺言，对于负责的工作和任务必须要认真完成，这对于年轻人将来的职业发展也会有帮助。
青年应该遵循社会传统，还是推崇个性自由。写作思路。
The fourth is to require young people to abide by rules and legal requirements and not to infringe on the interests of others or commit illegal acts which also helps to reduce the possibility of juvenile delinquency.
四是要求年轻人遵守规则和法律要求，不能去侵害他人利益或者做违法行为，这也有助于降低青少年犯罪的可能性。
However there are also problems in social traditions such as the lack of respect for women’s low social status in the past and the requirement that children completely obey the arrangements of their parents. Both of them have no independent life choice power including education love and career restrictions. . Therefore these traditions should not continue to be followed.
但是，社会传统中也有问题，比如以前女性的社会地位低下得不到应有尊重，以及要求孩子完全听从家长的安排，两者都没有独立的人生选择权力，包括教育、爱情、事业都受到限制。因此，这些传统不应该继续被遵循。#教育那些事#
Looking at personality freedom again this classmate should be easy to think of. There are two main benefits.
再来看个性自由，这个同学们应该很容易想到。好处主要有两方面。
One is that young people have their own right to choose what they want to do and what kind of life they want to live. Moreover the choices in modern society are very diverse. Young people can decide what they do according to their own preferences and expertise. Such a choice of personality is also more conducive to young people's potential to achieve better results.
一是年轻人有自己的权力选择自己想做些什么和过什么样的生活。而且现代社会的选择是非常多样的，年轻人可以根据自己的喜好、擅长来决定自己做什么。这样的个性的选择也更有助于年轻人发挥潜力获得更好的成果。
The second is that by allowing young people to play freely it will be more helpful to cultivate thinking ability creativity and enthusiasm. When they encounter problems they may also find more creative and efficient ways to solve them instead of just following the previous The way.
让年轻人自由发挥，将更有助于培养思维能力、创造力和积极性。
二是通过让年轻人自由发挥，将更有助于培养思维能力、创造力和积极性，当遇到问题时，他们也可能会找到更具创造性和效率的方式来解决问题，而不是一味遵循以前的方式。
However the downside of fully advocating freedom of personality is that if it is not restrained it may cause young people to develop in a bad direction and young people may take drugs commit crimes and other illegal activities. Do harm to yourself and society.
但是完全推崇个性自由坏处在于，如果不加以约束，可能会导致年轻人往坏的方向发展，年轻人可能会去吸毒、从事犯罪等违法行为。对自己和社会都造成危害。
Some people claim that youngsters should learn to be a social member restricted by traditional etiquette while others consider it better for them to be independent individual as they wish. Personally speaking neither of the two opinions is to justified enough to represent the entire picture.
有些人主张青少年应该学会做一个受传统礼节束缚的社会成员，而另一些人则认为最好让他们按照自己的意愿做一个独立的个体。就个人而言，这两种观点都不足以代表整个画面。
On the one hand it doesn’t make sense to oblige young minds to stick to traditions without substantiating what specific principles to follow. Indeed some traditional virtues do contribute to the cultivation of moral convictions among younger generations whether these be the respect for others hardworking spirit or frugality. Nevertheless the problem with the statement is the ambiguous descriptor ‘the traditions of the society’ which is an overarching concept that incorporates all rules embraced by older generations – while some still deserve a place today others may be incompatible with the whitewater world of constant change. One concept that fails to meet the modern trend of thought is the entrenched stereotype of women whose role has transformed from housewives locked to kitchens to business elites in offices as their male counterparts.#年轻人#
一方面，在没有证实要遵循的具体原则的情况下，强迫年轻人坚持传统是没有意义的。事实上，一些传统美德确实有助于培养年轻一代的道德信念，无论是尊重他人、勤奋精神还是节俭。然而，该声明的问题在于对“社会传统”的描述含糊不清，这是一个包含老一辈人接受的所有规则的总体概念——虽然有些人今天仍然值得拥有一席之地，但其他人可能与白水世界格格不入。不断的变化。一个不符合现代思潮的概念是对女性根深蒂固的刻板印象，她们的角色已经从锁在厨房的家庭主妇转变为办公室里的商业精英，就像男性一样。
By the same token it is also generalized to venerate the individualism without taking into account contexts. The devotees of personal freedom may point to its value in the establishment of qualities such as self-reliance or critical thinking ability; both are imperative in cultivating independent young minds. However those thinking in this way are oblivious to the underlying interplay between individual liberty and social order – the appropriateness of encouraging individualism should be subject to the social impacts desired in the local context and what is valued by local stakeholders. Let’s not forget that many social conundrums are attributed to the unrestricted behaviors of youngsters such as drug abuse juvenile delinquency etc.#自由#
出于同样的原因，崇尚个人主义也被概括为不考虑上下文。个人自由的奉献者可能会指出其在建立自力更生或批判性思维能力等品质方面的价值；两者都对培养独立的青年思想至关重要。然而，以这种方式思考的人忽视了个人自由与社会秩序之间潜在的相互作用——鼓励个人主义的适当性应该取决于当地环境所期望的社会影响以及当地利益相关者的重视程度。不要忘记，许多社会难题都归因于青少年不受限制的行为，例如吸毒、青少年犯罪等。
From what has been discussed it is my conclusion therefore neither social traditions nor individualism should be venerated as the only model of society; which view deserves more attention should be contextualized.
综上所述，我的结论是，无论是社会传统还是个人主义都不应被尊为唯一的社会模式；哪种观点值得更多关注，应根据语境进行分析。
