cet写作顺序（CET-6关键词作文OnHealth）

cet写作顺序（CET-6关键词作文OnHealth）Now that we know that health is the resource of our energy what should we do to maintain and enhance our health? First we should exercise every day to strengthen our muscles. Second we might as well keep good hours. If we get up early we can breathe fresh air and see the sunrise. This habit can do wonders⑤ for our outlook⑥ on life. Third there is a proverb that says “Prevention is better tha

【CET-6关键词作文】On Health

Directions: You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 160 words on the topic On Health. The following key words and phrases must be used in your composition:

1.valuable foundation future success

2.resource of our energy exercise keep good hours avoid getting sick

3.in conclusion healthy body

【范文】

On Health

As the proverb says “No one knows the value of health until he loses it.” In other words nothing is more valuable than health. It is clear that health is the foundation of one's future success. If you become sick it is nearly impossible to pursue① your career effectively② and much less to make your dreams come true. On the other hand if you are stout③ and strong you can go all out to overcome the obstacles④ that lie ahead of you.

Now that we know that health is the resource of our energy what should we do to maintain and enhance our health? First we should exercise every day to strengthen our muscles. Second we might as well keep good hours. If we get up early we can breathe fresh air and see the sunrise. This habit can do wonders⑤ for our outlook⑥ on life. Third there is a proverb that says “Prevention is better than cure.” If you pay close attention to your health you can avoid getting sick or at least cure yourself of a disease while it is still in its early stage.

In conclusion health is of great importance to our life. If you want your wish to come true you should firstly build a healthy body.

【注释】

①pursue: 追求，从事

②effectively: 有效地

③stout: 结实的

④obstacle: 障碍

⑤wonders: 奇迹

⑥outlook: 观点 见解

【简评】

这一是篇根据关键词写成的说明文。关键词作文除了作文题目以外，还提供关键的词和词组（key words），要求考生连词成句，连句成段，连段成文。这些词和短语，可能提示文章的主要内容，也可能是揭示文章结构的连接词。它们引导考生的思路，指明了文章的发展方向。这种题型不仅测试考生的文字表达能力，也能测试出考生的语言组织能力和篇章构思能力。

本文首先引用谚语No one knows the value of health until he loses it.并加以解释来表明健康的重要性。然后，作者从正反两方面证明健康是个人成功的基础。第二段承接上下文。列举了保持健康的方法。最后一段，总结全文，与首段形成呼应之势。

这篇短文抓住了关键词作文的特征，重点突出，结构严密。连接词的使用，增强了段落的层次感和逻辑连贯性。引用谚语，既突出了主题，又使行文更为生动活跃。

资料来源：新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书：六级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2006