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作文批改一对一（作文批改一篇）In these three years she taught me a lot of knowledge which I can use forever. I think she is a candle that lights up my life. Her teaching benefits me a lot. I learned the way to respect each other and make friends with others. Most important thing is that she regards us as friends. If we like a certain theme she will support us. How wonderful she is!There are a lot of people in the world who
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There are mountains of persons for us in the world. And they need respecting. Today let me tell you the person I respect my teacher.
During the three years she has taught me a lot of knowledge that I can use forever. I think that she is a candle that light up my life. Her teaching make me benefit a lot. I have learnt to respect each other and the way to make friends with others. Most importantly she treated us as friends. If we are fond of a subject she will support us. How great she is!
Generally speaking she’s really an important and great person during my middle school life. She is worthy of respect.
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There are a lot of people in the world who need our respect. Today let me tell you my respected person my teacher.
In these three years she taught me a lot of knowledge which I can use forever. I think she is a candle that lights up my life. Her teaching benefits me a lot. I learned the way to respect each other and make friends with others. Most important thing is that she regards us as friends. If we like a certain theme she will support us. How wonderful she is!
In a word she is a very important and great person during my middle school life. She deserves to be respected.
