高一英语作文观点对比类,高考情景作文74Talking
高一英语作文观点对比类,高考情景作文74TalkingT: Do you think it useful③?J: A plan for next week’s studies. I should decide② when to study English maths and so on.T: Jane what are you writing?J: I’m making a plan for① the coming week.T: What plan?
Unit 74 Talking about the Plans
It’s Friday. Class is over. Two students Tina (T) and Jane (J) are talking about their plans for the coming week.
请根据以上情景提示,写一篇100字左右的情景对话。
“范文”
T: Jane what are you writing?
J: I’m making a plan for① the coming week.
T: What plan?
J: A plan for next week’s studies. I should decide② when to study English maths and so on.
T: Do you think it useful③?
J: Of course④. I can make full use of⑤ my time and get more things done if I have a plan.
T: I agree. But do you always carry out⑥ your plans? Suppose a friend asks you to see a film or asks you to do some other things?
J: Well sometimes I leave room for such things. On the whole⑦ my plan works out⑧ all right.
T: I see. From now on⑨ I’ll begin to make plans as you do.
“注释:”
1. make a plan for: 制定……的计划
2. decide: 决定
3. useful: 有用的
4. of course: 当然
5. make(full)use of: (充分)利用
6. carry out: 执行,实施
7. on the whole: 大体上;基本上;总的看来
8. work out: 产生好结果,带来好处
9. from now on: 从现在开始
“点评:”
这是一篇根据英语情景提示展开的作文,是一篇情景对话。
情景对话要求根据所给的提示,根据对话发生的情景、谈话人的身份以及谈话的内容, 将语言知识置于一个特定的情景中,增加语境化的因素,突出语言的交际功能。因而,大家平时要熟记学过的、各种场合下的习惯用语和句型,根据具体情况灵活运用。
本文的话题是谈论下周计划。围绕该话题,这篇对话很好地体现了语言的交际功能。作者准确、恰当地运用了一些谈论计划的习惯用语和句型(大部分已在注释中提到)。
全文结构完整,用词得当,语言流畅,是一篇优秀的范文。
资料来源:英语作文高分必背丛书:高考/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2005